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~Grand Poetry~
Zual Lynzo Sat May 23, 2009 5:10 am
I'm sure we all have poems you'd want to share
Here's one of mine
~Breaking of the Seven~
7 Pandas Break In a House
They Eat The Husband They Strike The Spouse
They Steal the Trees They Steal the Leaves
They break in the next home, Like Professional Thieves
once they entered for their hope of a plunder
Zual striked them down with his Mighty Thunder~
Author~ ZualSin
Excerpt By Zual's Book "The Madness Of Zual"
not published but in the mind of Zual
Here's one of mine
~Breaking of the Seven~
7 Pandas Break In a House
They Eat The Husband They Strike The Spouse
They Steal the Trees They Steal the Leaves
They break in the next home, Like Professional Thieves
once they entered for their hope of a plunder
Zual striked them down with his Mighty Thunder~
Author~ ZualSin
Excerpt By Zual's Book "The Madness Of Zual"
not published but in the mind of Zual
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Major Sat May 23, 2009 10:00 am
Good poem, I can't do any as I am just not THAT bored. 
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Chaniii Sat May 23, 2009 10:40 am
All the warbears were on a mission
Except for Steve who,
Wanted to be a politician
Who tends reads all about them in a review,
Thinking to himself,usually about girls,he had a idea!
He thought that it was the best and couldn't wait,
To treat himself to see Maria.
Better yet what about Kate?
He went to his address book,on the side,
And took his Convetible for a ride.
Steve asked Kate to be his bride,
but she,cruelly and mean,denied!
Gobsmacked Steve cried for weeks,
When finally the rest of the warbears came back .
He asked them all for dating techniques ,
and had a supreme panic attack!
Rushed to the hospital,
Steve was wheeled in the A&E ward.
The doctors,each one a girl,made him crawl.
When infact Steve had damaged his vocal cord!
How would he speak?
How would he shriek?
How would he be a cheek?
He would he even seek?
Kate came to visit Steve,
He got his hope up thinking this was good,
But she said it was a relief.
Hoping he understood.
Steve was upset and yet got discharged,
So went to see Maria,in a garage.
On the way he got the proposal ring enlarged,
And she said but only if he'd give her a massage.
Except for Steve who,
Wanted to be a politician
Who tends reads all about them in a review,
Thinking to himself,usually about girls,he had a idea!
He thought that it was the best and couldn't wait,
To treat himself to see Maria.
Better yet what about Kate?
He went to his address book,on the side,
And took his Convetible for a ride.
Steve asked Kate to be his bride,
but she,cruelly and mean,denied!
Gobsmacked Steve cried for weeks,
When finally the rest of the warbears came back .
He asked them all for dating techniques ,
and had a supreme panic attack!
Rushed to the hospital,
Steve was wheeled in the A&E ward.
The doctors,each one a girl,made him crawl.
When infact Steve had damaged his vocal cord!
How would he speak?
How would he shriek?
How would he be a cheek?
He would he even seek?
Kate came to visit Steve,
He got his hope up thinking this was good,
But she said it was a relief.
Hoping he understood.
Steve was upset and yet got discharged,
So went to see Maria,in a garage.
On the way he got the proposal ring enlarged,
And she said but only if he'd give her a massage.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Chaniii Sat May 23, 2009 12:33 pm
This one kinda sucks but anyway...
I went out one day,
Infact,to the beach,
But I missed getting my bouquet
Listning to my mp3 along the way to 'Papa don't preach'
Walking along the sand,
I got a phone call.
And it was Paige,just as planned,
But just at that time coming up to her was Debbie Thrall.
Debbie Thrall was too kind,
She gave all her money.
Thinking she was giving the impression she was defined,
Dressed up a stupid pink easter bunny.
I was on my way home,
and saw a begger on the street.
So I sprayed,at their eyes shaving foam,
While he looked in disqust I knew he was a cheat.
I went out one day,
Infact,to the beach,
But I missed getting my bouquet
Listning to my mp3 along the way to 'Papa don't preach'
Walking along the sand,
I got a phone call.
And it was Paige,just as planned,
But just at that time coming up to her was Debbie Thrall.
Debbie Thrall was too kind,
She gave all her money.
Thinking she was giving the impression she was defined,
Dressed up a stupid pink easter bunny.
I was on my way home,
and saw a begger on the street.
So I sprayed,at their eyes shaving foam,
While he looked in disqust I knew he was a cheat.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Poison Sat May 23, 2009 1:10 pm
Hljoars wrote:Chan, both of those are quite amazing.
Indeed, I'm gonna make some.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Poison Sat May 23, 2009 1:14 pm
Major wrote:Hmm, this is gonna be intresting...
Oh, yes it is, indeed...
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Poison Sat May 23, 2009 1:19 pm
Chaniii wrote:Oooh lets see!!!
Wooooaaaah, I haven't made it, yet!
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Major Sat May 23, 2009 1:23 pm
Poison wrote:Chaniii wrote:Oooh lets see!!!
Wooooaaaah, I haven't made it, yet!
When i said it would be intrestng, I didn't mean in a good way.
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Poison Sat May 23, 2009 1:27 pm
Major wrote:Poison wrote:Chaniii wrote:Oooh lets see!!!
Wooooaaaah, I haven't made it, yet!
When i said it would be intrestng, I didn't mean in a good way.
I know.
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Major Sat May 23, 2009 1:31 pm
Poison wrote:Major wrote:Poison wrote:Chaniii wrote:Oooh lets see!!!
Wooooaaaah, I haven't made it, yet!
When i said it would be intrestng, I didn't mean in a good way.
I know.
So, how far are you?
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