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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Zual Lynzo Sat May 23, 2009 9:59 pm
Danger in the Mind
Time is nothing but a Illusion
it leads you into Excuses and Delusions
My Mind Is not attached by the mesmerizing puppet strings that control the mortals
For My Mind is Dangerous and filled with Portals.
Enter if You Dare but I will tell you to beware,
once you you enter to try to take command and control,
I will eat your mind like a delicious dinner roll.
Author ~Zual~
From The Book ~The Madness Of Zual~
Time is nothing but a Illusion
it leads you into Excuses and Delusions
My Mind Is not attached by the mesmerizing puppet strings that control the mortals
For My Mind is Dangerous and filled with Portals.
Enter if You Dare but I will tell you to beware,
once you you enter to try to take command and control,
I will eat your mind like a delicious dinner roll.
Author ~Zual~
From The Book ~The Madness Of Zual~
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Poison Sun May 24, 2009 12:49 am
Chaniii wrote:We're still waiting for it...
Like you waited for my picture...
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Poison Sun May 24, 2009 2:05 am
Chaniii wrote:You're gonna show me the poem over msn?
Nah.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Chaniii Sun May 24, 2009 1:26 pm
I dunno I just made it up?
[No Name]
Chaniii Mazinga liked bingo,
So went on a girly night out.
She went to a bingo place called Flamingo,
With a big sign pinned up with a trout.
Pinkitypop came with the girls,
She seemed to always have such a lucky streak.
Her hair in curls wearing diamonds and pearls,
In her very own way she was unique.
Chaniii luckily won the house,
Winning ten thousand pounds!
She tucked the money in her blouse,
And went away to the coffee grounds.
She eyed a boy,
Twirling with her hair.
To which he seemed to enjoy,
Plus the fact he was a millionaire!
She went right over,
And flirted more.
He gave her a japanese clover,
Knowing she couldn't resist anymore.
[No Name]
Chaniii Mazinga liked bingo,
So went on a girly night out.
She went to a bingo place called Flamingo,
With a big sign pinned up with a trout.
Pinkitypop came with the girls,
She seemed to always have such a lucky streak.
Her hair in curls wearing diamonds and pearls,
In her very own way she was unique.
Chaniii luckily won the house,
Winning ten thousand pounds!
She tucked the money in her blouse,
And went away to the coffee grounds.
She eyed a boy,
Twirling with her hair.
To which he seemed to enjoy,
Plus the fact he was a millionaire!
She went right over,
And flirted more.
He gave her a japanese clover,
Knowing she couldn't resist anymore.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Zual Lynzo Sat May 30, 2009 4:04 am
Zual and the Giraffe
A Giraffe named Caree stepped on my Car
so I Knocked Him To The Nearest Dumpster 3 miles far.
He came back For Revenge and tried to break into my house
so I used my magic and turned him into a mouse.
Caree then led a Army of Mice and raided my home
so I raised up my hands and sealed them all in a dome.
To make sure they wouldn't come back I sent my cat to the dome for a snack.
A Giraffe named Caree stepped on my Car
so I Knocked Him To The Nearest Dumpster 3 miles far.
He came back For Revenge and tried to break into my house
so I used my magic and turned him into a mouse.
Caree then led a Army of Mice and raided my home
so I raised up my hands and sealed them all in a dome.
To make sure they wouldn't come back I sent my cat to the dome for a snack.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Pinkitypop Sat May 30, 2009 5:57 pm
Chaniii wrote:I dunno I just made it up?
(I removed the poem just for the sake of shortening my post)
Nice poem Chan. Very good.
Ok, I'll give poetry a go, be warned, it doesn't rhyme.
Her hair whipped out behind her,
Her mouth set in a grimace of pain,
Her eyes ablaze with fury,
Her face ashen white.
She heard the footsteps fall behind her,
She saw the moon shining high in the night sky,
She tasted the tears running into her mouth,
She could almost smell her own fear.
In the darkness there was fear,
In the darkness there was pain.
-Darkness, a morbid poem by myself.
I have a rather morbid sense of literature.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Poison Sat May 30, 2009 11:22 pm
Major wrote:Poison, we have still yet to hear your poem.
Chaniii wrote:He'll never make one...
I'm still making it.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Major Sun May 31, 2009 5:20 am
It's one of those ones that take ages to make and it turns out to have two lines, right?
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Poison Sun May 31, 2009 8:13 am
Major wrote:It's one of those ones that take ages to make and it turns out to have two lines, right?
Yeah, probably.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
Pinkitypop Sun May 31, 2009 9:22 am
Poison wrote:Major wrote:It's one of those ones that take ages to make and it turns out to have two lines, right?
Yeah, probably.
Gosh Pois, I can write poems in minutes.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
captincroc Sun May 31, 2009 10:27 am
Don't encourage him, Chaniii. It's against the laws of life.
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Re: ~Grand Poetry~
captincroc Sun May 31, 2009 10:30 am
Well, Poison's would be the equivalent of a Volkons (Google it) and it's possible it would feature you in some form of sexual act or something like that.Chaniii wrote:To write poems?
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